[here it is! an interlaken haibun ~ achieved & drafted up on august 3rd, 2009 (one year ago). i've clearly done some editing here (quite a bit in fact), but hopefully you like it. hope you don't mind the slightly cheesy photo of our highway looming heads - brotherhood is a beautiful thing. enjoy]
eager & brimming with brotherhood ~ we set out one by one.
up from a bicycled horizon comes a house as yellow as the sun. it speaks midday shade thru trees to a tender wind leaning so slightly into the sails of our skin ~ directing the gaze of our soaring thoughts to the top of the overseeing water tower: still stanced & sky blue as noon ~ it calls to be filled ~ it glints & exults over our unspoken words as they consent & spill forth like gasoline into a blazing torch ~ {for You oh God} ~ flaming blue within the hands of our outstretched minds!
with the strength of our hearts ~ we pedal on ~ striving amid the endless husks of corn that know our names: by the sounds ~ by the whirrs & the whispers ~ by the voice of the Spirit ~ calling us forward ~ row by row ~ by row by row ~ as shadows led by birds across the highway carry the secret that life will surely evaporate into an eternal sky.
as far as we can see ~ new growth is stretching outward & reaching upward in worship & hope as clouds look on in blissful wonder. why ~ wide-eyed ~ must we strive to see such things?
in the midst of a slow descent ~ thru two open doors that peer out from opposite ends of a great, cavernous barn ~ our eyes behold the fields of the Lord ~ sustained in this now! ~ sustained even right now!!
further on ~ upon the gentle sway of corn tassels ~ our eyes skip like stones ~ stopping only for a single tree that a thrown stone could never reach.
with thoughtful turns we treadle on ~ through lush green hymns of sun glimmered elations ~ pressing deeper into a land that is permeated with fertility & perpetually emanates with sweet aromas ~ until slowly we approach ~ just beyond the roadside ~ a secluded tree oasis ~ bonsai-like & growing out of a small body of water ~ and this amazes us ~ for the moment at least… ~ …until the unseen bird emerges… ~ …a blue heron! ~ (prehistoric, slow-motion wing thrusts sending it off into the sun) ~ and we intend to watch it retreat forever with nothing in the sky to prevent us ~ baffling over such a big bird in such a small tree… ~ …and then it happens again… ~ …a red-tailed hawk springs right out of the very same small oasis tree ~ right over top of our thoroughly blown minds ~ and sets sail in the completely opposite direction of the heron!! ~ what kind of . . . ! ! prophecy <({})> ycehporp ! ! . . . is this? ~ each one in plain sight of our gaping heads ~ we pivot & gasp & sigh ~ we gasp & laugh & pivot ~ and with nothing much to say ~ we shake our heads & re-mount our bikes.
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subtle are the sounds that send one-hundred black birds up from hiding ~ whirling as one like a garment in a gale, then sinking swiftly into the silence of a vast & living nest.
“look there.” ~ a contorted ladder mounted at the top of a silo ~ seems to be cowering beneath the weight of the sky, or bowing at the thought of ascension maybe. “and there.” ~ up from some stack ~ a cloud goes smoking like a prayer into heaven.
we come upon a village and pull off for a rest and a look around. having a drink up a stony way we encounter two things most precious ~ twins ~ two, maybe three years old & adorned in purple from head to toe ~ long, afternoon locks of exploratory hair peering out from the neatly tucked coverings of the morning ~ shy, searching eyes ~ Amish hearts with sin dwelling somewhere within, but you’d never know it from looking. we wander about from jams to cheeses ~ exchanging smiles & glances ~ such beauty and a full life here. minding our own now, we saddle up with a wave & begin to find our way back home.
Great job, man!!!!! Sorry it's taken me so long to comment. Wow, this really captures the moment of that time. It also jogged my memory. One thing that I'm amazed you didn't include was the herd of cows that were freely running around like spring calves....that was pretty crazy. Some of my favorite lines are:
ReplyDeleteup from a bicycled horizon comes a house as yellow as the sun. it speaks midday shade thru trees to a tender wind leaning so slightly into the sails of our skin......
as shadows led by birds across the highway carry the secret that life will surely evaporate into an eternal sky. ....
right over top of our thoroughly blown minds.....
or bowing at the thought of ascension maybe. “and there.” ~ up from some stack ~ a cloud goes smoking like a prayer into heaven. ....
Amish hearts with sin dwelling somewhere within, but you’d never know it from looking...
our eyes skip like stones ~ stopping only for a single tree that a thrown stone could never reach. ....
we treadle on .....
I also really like the reflective prophecy.
and the O~O things...they are reminiscent of bicycles...I'm sure that was your intent...nice touch. There are so many good things in here. Thanks for putting it down so well. I love it!!!!